Monday, March 23, 2015

Double Back

Francois Truffaut said of Alfred Hitchcock, "He is the greatest living director and the only director that if sound in film were to vanish, his films would lose none of the meaning and coherence", or some shit like that. Years ago a friend of mine, Robert Willoughby, and I went to see a restored print of Hitchcock's "Vertigo". The amazing thing to me about that version of "Vertigo" (other than it's awesomeness as a film) was the remarkable photography of San Fransisco in the sixties. It looked as if it was shot earlier that year not decades before. That being said, Rob and I were inspired to co-write this Hitchcockian rip-off of a script that isn't nearly as bad as I remember it being. It takes place in rural Missouri in the nineties.


"Double Back"

fade in:

ext.  Downtown city street - day - Six months earlier

Several Police cars sit, lights flashing, in front of a dilapidated downtown apartment buildings.  Their lights flash,  A van marked "DEA" pulls up and SCREECHES to a halt.

int.  downtown apartment - day - Six months earlier

A dirty looking young Man quickly turns from the apartment window and walks towards ALEX BARROW.  The dirty looking man wears a stained white T-shirt and Bermuda shorts, no shoes. Alex stands motionless.  He bears the look of a forty year old heroin addict.  His eyes are sunken and his skin is blistered and weathered.  He is only in his mid-twenties, but you'd never know it.  Alex has an automatic Glock pistol in his hand that hangs effortlessly at his side. 

Bags of cocaine lie piled up on the table in the middle of the cramped room.

dirty looking man

The fucking cops are here!

aLEX

Just chill.  There's hundreds of apartments in this building.

The Dirty looking man starts to pile the bags of coke in his arms.

diRTY LOOKING MAN

I don't like this!

Alex raises the gun and points it at the man's head.  The barrel rests inches from his brow.

aLEX

I wouldn't do that cowboy.

A POUNDING on the door is followed by several screams behind it.

dea lieutenant  (O.S)

Police officer!  Open up now!

The man takes a step away from Alex.

aLEx

Don't shoot!

diRTY LOOKING MAN

What?

aLEx

Put the gun down.

The man walks towards the bathroom with the coke.

dea lieutenant (o.s.)

We're comin' in!

aLEx

No!

Alex fires a shot into into the man's back.  He fires another shot into the back of the man's head as his body falls to the ground

The DeA Officers from outside break in and rush around Alex at frantic speed.  Alex stands motionless.

aLEX

I'm a N.O.  I'm a cop.

The DEA Lieutenant stands over the man's dead body.  He turns to Alex who holds his gun down at his side as before.

deA LIEUTENANT

Put the gun down.

aLEX

I'm a cop.

Alex drops the the gun and another DEA officer, JEFF, grabs Alex's wallet from his back jeans pocket.  The wallet is attached to the jeans with a wallet chain and it jerks Alex back as the Cop rips it from the belt loop.

Alex falls backwards onto the cop and three other officers wrestle Alex to the ground and pry him off Jeff.

aLEX

I'm a cop!

INT. ALEX BARROW'S APARTMENT - day - present

The living room is dark, with only a few pieces of furniture and Ansel Adams poster on the wall.  Several weeks worth of newspapers are strewn throughout the room.

Alex  sits in a folding chair in the corner of the room, reading the front page section of today's newspaper by the light from the window.

He opens the paper, revealing the front page.

The headline reads "Charges finally dropped for officer".

He stands and stretches, folds the paper down neatly, and places in it a small overnight bag sitting on the couch.

INT. ALEX'S BEDROOM - day

He moves some of the clothes away that are laying helter-skelter on his bed, he turns suddenly remembering something and reaches over to his dresser and picks up his wallet, a ring, and his watch from a cluster of miscellaneous jewelry and such on top of the dresser.  He has a cigarette dangling from his mouth.

On the wall next to the mirror are dozens of newspaper articles relating to his case.  "Young Cop Was Out for Vigilante Justice", "Five Indicted in Drug Scandal", "Barrow Refuses to Cut Deal", are some of the headlines.

He puts out the cigarette on the top of his dresser and takes a pack of cigarettes from his pocket and tosses them on the dresser.

Alex grabs a duffel bag stuffed with clothes from his perpetually unmade bed and a jacket draped over a chair.

INT. LIVING ROOM - day

With the duffel bag in one hand and his jacket in another, he throws his overnight bag over his shoulder.

He opens the front door, looks back for another quick memory, then exits the apartment.

INT. TRAILER - DAY

It is the same day inside a mobile home on the outskirts of town.  The trailer sits in an area protected by a lot of trees on one side and a small lake on another.

BETH LANGLEY has her eyes glued to an old thirteen-inch television in the corner of the living room.

BETH

Don't believe her!

(beat)

Don't believe it!

(beat)

I told you, you stupid bitch!

she leaps to her feet and begins pacing.

beTH (cont'd)

 

(upset)

How she could ever get mixed up with that loser?  What the hell was the matter with Martino?

She swings her arms wildly, knocking over a trophy, one of many sitting on the mantle.

beTH

He's not good enough!  Go back to Martino you...

Beth begins to back up and as she talks she trips over the trophy she has knocked over.

beTH

idiot...whoa!  Oops.

EXT. MOM'S CAFE - DAY 

Alex and his Honda pull into the square of a small Midwestern town called Danville.  The town is small.  A one traffic light town.  Population around four thousand. In the middle of the square is the county seat. A giant courthouse/jail.  Around it is a park, but their are no children playing on the swing set and the jungle gym that sits under one particularly large tree.  There is a street that encircles the courthouse square.  Along that street are several shops, Mom's Cafe, and a couple of bars and pool halls. 

It is a windy day blowing dust all over the gravel paved parking lot.  The parking lot is lined with several old pickup trucks outside the front of the diner.  Several old timers sit on a porch that runs down the entire block of the town square, jawing about the weather, their relatives, and the government.

Alex pulls into an empty space along a strip of store, right in front of a restaurant on the square with a small neon sign which reads: "MOM'S CAFE".

He climbs out of the car, stands up straight and squints as the wind gusts.  He takes a look around and then walks towards the entrance of the diner when he stops to respond to a older man on the porch.

MR. KREITZER

It takes some kind of a man to crawl back here on his hands and knees.

Alex turns to see MR. KREITZER, an aging sort of curmudgeon sweeping the walk outside the row of stores.  He looks down at his hands, then at his feet, while not responding verbally to the comment.

MR. KREITZER

I always knew you'd screw up and come back here.

A couple of the old timers, ELMORE AND JEB, sit on a bench a few feet from Alex.

JEB

You know it's just sick when you can't ever trust the police.

Elmore leans forward and swats at a fly.

ELMORE

Shoot, that's why I'm glad we don't have to put up with that stuff around here.

Alex again doesn't respond and opens the door to the diner.

mr. KREITZER

That's the problem with you kids today, ya never stand up for...

Alex lets go of the door and steps quickly towards the old man.  He grabs the broom which Mr. Kreitzer doesn't let go of.

Alex

(sternly)

Remember, I was acquitted.

jeb

Damn plea bargain's what it was.

He lets go of the broom and walks into the diner.

Mr. Kreitzer turns to Jeb and Elmore.

MR. KREITZER

I always thought that boy would make something of himself.

INT. MOM'S CAFE - DAY

Mom's cafe is an old time looking coffee shop with booths and a counter with a grille behind it. It sits on the town square.  The decor appears not to have changed since the early sixties. The clientele is made up of older people who all dress casually, most wearing jeans and western wear.

Alex enters, removing his sunglasses.

The cafe is busy and fairly noisy and when Alex walks in business continues as usual.

A heavy set man in an apron comes out from the kitchen and walks right up to him.  He extends his hand. They shake.

DAD

Alex.

Alex

Dad, What're you doing here?

With hands still entwined, Alex pulls himself in for a hug.  They embrace firmly.

Alex's mother also comes out from the kitchen.  She runs over to Alex and gives him a patented maternal bear hug.

DAD

Give the boy some room, Mom.  You'll scare him off.

Mom pulls away from Alex.

aLEX

(To Mom)

What's Dad doing in the restaurant?

moM

He's been helping a little bit, lately.

dAD

Been a bad year.  No rain.

Some of the patrons begin to stand and greet Alex themselves.

PATRON 1

Good to have to you back.  I, I didn't believe a word of it.

PATRON 2

Maybe it was just meant to be that you'd come back home.

Alex nods uncomfortably as his father grabs his arm.

mom

Hungry?

Alex

I could eat. But I'll make it myself.

mom

Be my guest.

INT. Diner, kitchen - DAY

Alex puts on an apron identical to his father's.

Alex

Alright, where are the eggs around here?

His mother grabs a couple eggs and sets them in front of him.

Alex breaks the eggs and begins to fry them up.  His father stands to side of him while Alex continues to fix his breakfast.

DAD

So...uh, how is everything?

Alex

It's a long drive.  I think it gets longer every time.

DAD

That's not really what I meant.

Alex

Well, things have been...better.

Mom speaks from across the kitchen.

MOM

How long are you staying?

Alex

You trying to run me out of town already?

MOM

No.  No, not at all.  I got your room all ready to go, just like always.

Alex

Do you still have those Kansas City Royals sheets?

MOM

I think I can find them somewhere, if you'd like.

Alex laughs.

Alex

No, that's OK.  Whatever'll be fine.

Mom gives a little chuckle.  She looks to her husband and smiles.  But their smiles turn to troubled looks.  Alex doesn't seem to notice.

aLEX

I think I'm going to go camping tonight.

DAD

What?

MOM

Alex, you just got here.

 

 

Alex

Yeah, but despite my usual stoic demeanor, I still have a lot of things to

 

think about and besides, I think I should take advantage of the good weather.

MOM

It's not that we're worried, it's just that...

DAD

...what your Mom is trying to say is that we're not worried, it's just that...

Alex

...I know.  You're concerned.  But it's all over.  I screwed up, it wasn't my fault, but I just can't be a cop anymore.  It's nothing any of us should lose sleep over any more.  I just think the outdoors is what I need.

Mom grabs his arm.

aLEX

I'll be back bright and early.  You can have me for the entire day.  I hope that's OK.  OK?

DAD

If you need some time, boy, you take the time. 

Alex

OK.  Thanks for...uh.

Mom rubs Alex's arm and steps away from him.

moM

It's all right.

Mom and Dad leave the kitchen.

Alex looks down at his meal that is burnt.

aLEX

Oh shit.

INT. TRAILER, KITCHEN - DAY

Beth is at the kitchen table, broken trophy and a bottle of glue in hand.

LIONEL LANGLEY, her husband, stumbles through the front door, covered with dirt from head to toe.

lIONEL

What's with the bonfire outside?

Beth double-times to get everything hidden before Lionel sees, but is not quick enough.

Lionel stands in the doorway, staring at her, teeth clinched.  She cowers like a puppy.  He walks off.

 

INT. SHERIFF'S OFFICE - DAY

Alex walks into the office like a church mouse. 

The only sound in the entire building is coming from NAT LARABEE, a uniformed mountain of a man pecking away at a typewriter.

NAT

(not looking)

Can I help you?

Alex

Yeah, uh, I'm looking for the big lummox who knocked up my sister.

Nat spins around and laughs.

NAT

There you are, So you heard?

Alex

Well I heard I was going to be an uncle, so I assumed it was you although I had my doubts.

NAT

That's my wife you're talking about you sick bastard.

Alex

So, how is everything?

NAT

They've been better.

Alex

I've heard that one before.

NAT

I bet.  But no, it's just the three of us now.

(beat)

Myers found out his wife has cancer, so they've been in St. Louis getting treatment.  So he's practically part time.  And Nyland went back to the factory when we told him he couldn't shoot anybody he wanted.

Alex

Jesus Christ.

NAT

Yeah, that son of a bitch would go out and pick fights at the Crawdad, then start waving his piece around.

Alex

Sounds like you've got your hands full.

NAT

So where've you been keeping yourself?

Alex

Oh, here and there.  I'll be here, home for a while.

NAT

So, Al, just between you and me, what happened with you? I mean if you don't mind, you don't have to tell me if you don't want.

Alex

No, it's alright. I made a mistake and they made an example of me, pure and simple.

NAT

Did you know?

Alex

Yeah I knew. I knew and I didn't do anything about it.

NAT

So you lose your job.

Alex

Can't have an officer associating with drug users, can we?

NAT

Well...

Alex

...It was stupid.  He said we're going to a party, told me he had some dope.  How am I supposed to know the guys driving on expired plates, and would get pulled over.

(beat)

Don't trust anyone, Nat.

Alex takes a quick look around.

alEX

Well, I'll let you get back to work.  Hey, is Murphy all right?

NAT

Murphy's Murphy.

Alex

Well if you see him, tell him I'll stop back by and holler at him.

NAT

Take her easy.

EXT. FOREST - NIGHT

Every star is out on this perfect mid-western night.  The only sounds that can be heard are the low roar of nature:  the rustling leaves, the cool wind against the lake, the animals.

Alex sits on a log, poking a stick into his dying fire.  He stares blankly out over the moonlit lake.

He squints to check his watch.  He rises, stretches and begins to unroll his sleeping bag.

He walks into the woods, past a big rock and big dead tree, his campfire barely in sight.

He comes to a sudden stop and stares into the ground.

It is the dead body of a young woman, fully clothed.

He stares at the body for a second or two and then he kneels down to take a closer look.  

He tries to get closer to the body, but he slips and falls half-way into the pond.

Alex

Shit!

ext.  foREST, near Alex's car - NIGHT

Alex walks up to his car, that is parked to the side of a two-lane county road.

He opens the car door and searches around the glove compartment.  He pulls out a cell phone.  He leans against the car and dials.

 

EXT. FOREST - NIGHT

The beams of light from the flashlights slash through the woods.

Alex, Murphy, and Armando Walker walk slowly through the woods, intently looking around, with little chatter.

A stream of smoke filters into the sky where Alex's fire was.  The search continues.

MURPHY

Did you recognize the body?

wALKER

(to himself)

I bet it was those damn two boys I caught at the Burger King.

Alex

(to murphy)

Uh,no.  but I didn't really take a good look.

wALKER

(to Alex)

I mean it, those bastards looked like they were up to no good.

Alex stops walking and turns to Walker

aLEX

What would the charge have been?

muRPHY

Fellas, c'mon now.

aLEx

No, seriously.

wALKER

They had on all that gang paraphernalia, probably gettin' ready to raid the high school.  You know, the girls.

ALEX

Aren't you Mexican?

wALKER

Half, but I'm one-hundred percent red-neck.

aLEX

Great.

Murphy clears his throat.

MURPHY

OK, you said it was close to this rock over here, right?

Alex

Yeah.

MURPHY

You sure it was a dead body?

Alex

For God's sake, I know a dead body when I see it.

MURPHY

Maybe you didn't see what you thought you saw.

Walker makes a "he drank to much gesture" with his hand.

Alex

Murphy, I saw a body.  I'm a cop.

Alex shakes his head.

MURPHY

Well, there doesn't seem to be one here now.

Alex begins to get more frazzled.  He covers the area very quickly, kicking up leaves and dirt.

Alex

(agitated)

It has to be here.

Walker

I think we should pack it in until morning.  We're just covering the same old tracks.

MURPHY

I don't know.

Alex

We can't leave a crime scene.

Walker

Hey supercop, it's not a crime scene until we've established that there's been a crime.

Alex quickly steps in Murphy's direction.

Alex

(angry)

Who is this guy?

MURPHY

Come on.

walKER

Seriously, Murphy.  We're trying to do our job here.

muRPHY

This here's Alex.  He's Edna's, uh, Mom's boy.  One of the youngest detectives ever for the KCPD.

Walker roll's his eyes.

wAlKER

Nat mentioned you.

aLEX

We better start looking.

Walker

Call it just being practical.  Let's wait until the morning.  Then we can get a fresh start and start dredgin' the lake.

Alex rubs his face with his hands and yawns.

aLEX

I guess.

Walker

If you'd like, I can stand guard out here.

MURPHY

I'm makin' the call, Alex.

Alex paces back and forth, eyes pressed to the ground.

Alex

Fine.  But I'm staying too.

Walker

That ain't necessary.

Alex

I'm staying.

MURPHY

I don't see what it'll hurt.  I'll be back in the morning with some breakfast.

(beat)

I think we better keep this thing quiet until we actually know something definite. 

Walker

Sure, chief.

Walker and Murphy take off towards the car as Alex keeps searching for something, anything.

ext.  forest - night

Later that night, Walker is asleep, sitting with his head propped up against a tree.  He has a Toronto Maple Leafs blanket wrapped around his large mid-section.

The campfire is smoldering down.

Alex opens a can of beans with a manual can opener.  The opener sticks and he tries to force it to move.  He cuts his hand and some of the beans fall to the ground.  He doesn't cringe in pain, but merely stairs at the blood slowly oozing from the small cut on this hand.

EXT. FOREST - DAY

The sun peaks through a narrow opening in the trees to the west.  A thin blanket of haze sits over the lake, a covering for the lowland woods where the search continues.

Walker and Alex both crouch near the large stone.

Murphy and LYLE MOECK, a short man handling a pair of dogs walk along the crest of a hill overlooking a steep drop.

Walker

Well, there's some footprints. but it's a pretty safe guess that they're ours.

aLEX

What about that trailer over there?

MuRPHY

That's Lionel's.  Heck, that's over a mile away.

Alex

Yeah but there's people always out here, the owners don't mind. This one.

He points with a stick to the footprint.

Alex

It could be a small man's...or a woman.

Murphy and Lyle with his dogs are traversing the steep slope to where Alex and Walker are standing.

Walker

Or a young kid's.  All of this is bull until we find your body.

Murphy slips on a rock.

muRPHY

Whooah!

He tumbles the last ten feet down the slope.

Walker speeds over to Murphy in his waddling way.

The Dogs BARK and drag Lyle over to Murphy.  They begin licking him.

muRPHY

Goddammit.  Goddamn dogs.

He pushes the dogs away.

lyle

Jesus, Sheriff.

AleX

You OK, Murphy.

muRPHY

Yeah, yeah.

Walker helps him up.

MurPHY (cont'd)

Thanks, partner.  Maybe we can find out if there's been any missing persons in the area. 

waLKER

We're just wasting our time, boss.

Murphy walks away.

Alex catches up with him, and Murphy puts his hand on Alex's shoulder.

MurPHY

We can look at some pictures.  And get a sketch artist to take a composite from you, that is if you got a good enough look at it.

Walker shakes his head and looks at Lyle who refuses to make eye contact with him.

INT. TRAILER, BEDROOM - DAY.

Beth slinks through the door in a slump as Lionel changes his clothes.

LIONEL

I thought we had rules around here.

BETH

We do.

LIONEL

Then why don't you follow them?

BETH

It didn't happen like that.

LIONEL

What character was it this time?  Was it Leslie?

BETH

Lionel.

Lionel breathes in deeply and rolls his eyes.

LIONEL

Or was it Martino?

BETH

Accidents happen.

LIONEL

Things get particularly dangerous around here between two and three o'clock, don't they?

BETH

You're a monster!

He throws her onto the bed.

LIONEL

And you broke the rules!

He throws her onto the bed.

lIONEL

And if you keep watching those damn soaps, the TV's not the only thing's getting thrown out the door.

lIONEL

You better be fixin' to make me dinner.  I ain't waiting around like last night.  I guarantee that.

He lets her up.  She dives under the bed and pulls out a pair of panties in one hand and an earring in another.

BETH

Whose are these?  Whose are these, Lionel?

lIONEL

You go fishing again?

BETH

I know they're hers!

Lionel ignores her.

bETH

You seen her lately?

lIONEL

I don't know what you're talking about, woman.

INT. SHERIFF'S OFFICE - DAY

The office is empty and quiet.  Bright sunlight  peers through the open windows. 

Alex is leafing through a book of photos.  His right hand is bandaged.

Armando and Murphy are both on the phone.  Murphy stands in the corner of the room.  Walker sits at his desk and flips through a yearbook. 

Alex stands in front of Walker looking carefully through another high school yearbook.

wAlKER

(in Spanish)

No, no Mama.  I told you not to talk to those people on the phone.  Yes, but...

In the background, a radio PLAYS. 

Alex

(to Murphy)

Are these all the yearbooks you have?

Murphy puts the phone away from his mouth.

MuRPHY

There's a whole stack, under the coffee maker.

raDIO ANNOUNCER (o.s.)

Wow.  What a round for the unknown Mexican, Hernandez.  It's got to be important, getting in so early with such a low score.

walKER

(in Spanish)

You can't afford all those subscriptions.  Mama, you'll just gonna have to tell them no.

Alex grabs huge stack of books and sets them on Walker's desk.

Murphy puts his hand over the receiver.

MURPHY

(To Alex)

This is really the best way to keep track of this part of the state. 

Alex nods as he continues his search.

MuRPHY

(Into phone)

Yeah, just somebody who can take a sketch.  We might have a situation up here that needs some attention.

(beat)

No, nothing right now.  We're doing some double-checking on somebody.

Alex puts his yearbook down and moves over behind Walker.  He looks over his shoulder.

muRPHY

Sounds good.  You take her easy, Jimmy.

(To Alex)

They' might have somebody up this afternoon.

MURPHY

(Into phone)

Well, that was Nodaway County. No missing persons up north by your description.  But she could have been from the college.  If she'd lived alone, nobody'd know she was missing for...

walkER

(in Spanish)

No.  Mama no.  Please will you just listen to me this one time?

Alex grabs at a page that Walker is turning.

Alex

(excited)

...That's her!

Murphy drops the phone and races over to Alex.  They look down into the yearbook.

MURPHY

That's my boy.  Which one?

walKER

(in Spanish)

Everything's all right.   No, I, I uh...

Walker motions the two back.  Only Murphy steps back.

walKER (cont'd)

(in spanish)

I gotta call you back.   I know.  I know.

Alex

Her.

Alex puts his finger on the girl's name.

aLEX

Jan Wiley.

MURPHY

Jan Wiley.  That's Buck and Mavis' girl.

(beat)

Better get them on the horn.  See if they know what's up.

Walker

You don't know them.

MURPHY

I know 'em a little from a couple of fourth of July's ago. I used to hunt pheasant up north with my brother Bobby...few years back anyway.

raDIO ANNOUNCER (o.s.)

We're here live at the U.S. Open golf tournament and a great story is developing, with Juan Hernandez leading the tournament with an opening round sixty-five.

Walker leans towards Alex.

Walker

Are you sure that's her?

Alex takes a long look.

Alex

Sure as I can be.

MURPHY

Well, I think the least we can do is contact her parents.

Walker

Yeah, but what if she turns out to be on vacation or something, then we just look like stupid country bumpkins.

MURPHY

We are stupid country bumpkins.

EXT.  WILEY'S HOUSE - DAY

Murphy, Walker, and Alex walk up the stairs to a large farm house in the middle of nowhere.

Walker looks at Murphy before Murphy can knock on the door.

Walker

I hope this guy remembers you.

Alex

People don't like men with badges around here, Jim.

MURPHY

Murphy knocks hard on the door.

MURPHY

We're almost family for Christ's sake.

BUCK WILEY, a tall man in overalls, answers the door.

BUCK

Can I help you?

MURPHY

Hey, Buck.

buCK

We're all out of tacos.

muRPHY

See, he remembers us.

BUCK

What can I do for you officers?

MURPHY

Uh, can we go inside, maybe sit down.

BUCK

No, no we can't.  Mavis is doing one of those home perms.  The whole place smells like a beauty parlor.  Let's just hang around out here.

They all walk off the front porch and begin to stroll about the house.

MURPHY

We don't want to worry you Mr. Wiley, and there may be nothing to worry about, but...

Alex

When was the last time you saw your daughter?

BUCK

Who's this fellow here?

Buck points at Alex.

aLEX

I'm Alex Barrow.  Have you seen her recently?

MURPHY

This is Alex, he's helping us with some things.

BUCK

Oh.

Alex

Have you seen Jan lately?

BUCK

Well, mother spoke to her a couple weeks ago but I probably haven't seen her in over a month.  She moved down to Kansas City a while back.

MURPHY

How long ago?

BUCK

Must be going on a year now, at least.

(beat)

What's all this about?  Is she in trouble?

Alex

What has happened is, well...it's very important we try to contact her, and make sure she's alright.

Buck sits and thinks for a second.

BUCK

Well, let's go inside and clear all this up.

INT.  WILEY'S HOUSE - DAY

The three officers sit next to MAVIS WILEY, a thick woman with her hair rolled up under a plastic shower cap.  Buck is on the phone.

BUCK (o.s.)

Uh, Jan, this is your father. 

Mavis speaks to the officers.

MAVIS

Can't you tell us more, more than just she's in some kind of trouble?

BUCK (o.s.)

Give me a call when you get in.  Just wanted to see how you were doing. 

Alex

The other night...

Walker

Wait...

MURPHY

It's alright.

BUCK (o.s.)

Or Marsha, if you get this message, if you could give us a holler.  Like I said, we're just checking up on Jan.

He hangs up.  He begins to twitch a bit, rubbing his neck and staring at the floor.

Mavis rises and begins to pace.

Alex

The other night, I was camping and I saw a woman, a body of a woman, that looked like your daughter. 

buCK

Oh my God!

alEX

It may be nothing, I know this is upsetting.

Both Buck and Mavis stare deeply at Alex.  They lean forward and whisper to each other.  Mavis stands and begins pacing again.

MaviS

(to Alex)

Do we know you from somewhere?

Alex

My parents live here in town.  Ronald and Jean Barrow.

BUCK

No, that's...You were that cop in Kansas City aren't you?

MAVIS

The drug addict.

Alex

No, that's not...I don't have a drug problem Mrs. Wiley, I uh...

BUCK

So what were you on that night?  In the woods I mean.

Alex

Sir, I was reprimanded for an incident, but I do not use...

BUCK

Deputy, you better look at where you're getting your information.  Maybe you all better leave.

Alex jumps up.

Alex

What are you saying?  You don't care if something's happened?  What kind of people are you that...

Buck stands nose to nose with him.

BUCK

Listen son, I don't know you or your parents, but you've got some balls on you to talk to me like this.  Now you drag your crack-smoking ass off my property before I throw it off.  If anything was wrong with my daughter, she would have called a long time ago.

Alex

(dumbfounded)

She would have called?  You're one dumb son of a...

BUCK

Get this guy outta here!

MURPHY

Come on, let's go.

Murphy drags Alex outside by his arm.  Walker follows.

INT.  SHERIFF'S OFFICE-DAY

Murphy, Walker, and Alex sit around a small table, head in their hands, slouching.  Nat is at his desk typing.

Walker reads the local paper as he leans back in his wooden chair.  He uses his gut like a table for the paper to sit on.

Alex

I shouldn't have gone.

MURPHY

It's probably for the best anyway.  Once word'd got out, this whole county'd be in a tail spin. Now we can look into things without a lot of interference since we don't have a body...

Walker

...or any evidence.

Alex

I know what I saw.

Walker

You'd had a few beers.

Alex

A few beers doesn't mean you confuse a dead body with a log.

waLKER

Could you have made a mistake?

Alex throws his arms down and jumps up, and begins to pace.

muRPHY

Now what?

Alex

I'm going back to the city.

MURPHY

You're gonna be on your own.

Alex

There's gotta be something I can find.  I'll call soon.

Alex heads to the door.

MURPHY

You take care of yourself first.  Remember that.

Walker keeps his attention to his paper.

Walker

Take her easy.

Alex exits.

Walker

So?

MURPHY

I hope something comes up, but he may have just been drunk off his ass and none of this stuff ever happened.

Walker

That's my guess.

muRPHY

Why don't you go and keep an eye on him.

wALKER

What?

He puts down his paper.

muRPHY

I promised Edna I'd look after him, Walker.

wALKER

I want an extra week's vacation for this.

muRPHY

You don't have to go now.

int.  mom's cafe - day

Alex and his parents sit in a booth in the empty room.

dAD

I don't understand son.  You just got here.

aLEX

Well.

Alex shrugs.

Mom

There's something wrong.

ALEX

I've gotta run back home for a few days.

MoM

I was hoping you thought of this as your home.

aLEX

I'm doing a favor for Murphy, it's nothing big.

moM

You haven't spent a night at home yet.

aLEX

I'll be back in two days.

dAD

We're not here to judge you.  If you're in trouble again, you can tell us.

Alex stands up and laughs.

aLEX

I know, I...

He starts to head for the door.

Dad walks over to Alex and grabs his arm.

dAD

I don't want any more trouble.  If there's any more of this drug stuff, I don't want you around here.

Mom turns in her chair and faces Alex.

moM

Listen to him.

alEX

Thanks a lot.

He leaves and slams the door.

Mom breaks down into tears.

Dads

It had to be done.

INT. Trailer, KITCHEN - Day

Lionel and Beth sit silently at the kitchen table.  The kitchen is a mess.  Food bits and crumbs are all over the counters and boxes, pots and pans, and other assorted junk sits

Lionel shovels in the food as if his last meal. Beth pokes at hers, head down.

LIONEL

Eat!  I ain't eatin' alone.

No response.

LIONEL

Suit yourself.

(beat)

This is different.

He takes a close look at his food.

LIONEL

What they hell is this, paprika?

BETH

No it isn't.

LIONEL

I can't get the taste.

BETH

It isn't paprika, Lionel.

Lionel coughs.

LIONEL

I can't get the taste.

He coughs ferociously.

Beth rises from the table and takes her plate to the sink.

BETH

I don't think it has a taste Lionel.

Lionel begins to cough even more violently.

beTH

Least it's not supposed to.

He falls to the floor, clutching his throat.

beTH

I wasn't going to try it out.

She goes over to Lionel, writhing on the floor in pain.

beTH

(calmly)

You made me.  Now it's just me and Martino now.

His flailing legs knock into the table, tipping over plates and glasses.  Porcelain and glass chips cover his body.

beTH

You know honey, there, we have rules around here.

From behind her back she pulls a cast-iron skillet.  She raises it above her head and the body of her fallen husband.

He doesn't move.

She bends down on her hands and knees and kisses Lionel on the forehead.

She wipes a tear and sweat from her face and brings a skillet down onto his head.

int.  Alex's apartment, living room - night

The apartment is as he left it, with the exception of a flashing red light on his answering machine.

He hits the playback button on the answering machine.

TomMY

(Filtered)

Al, baby.  It's Tommy.  If there's anything I can do, call me.  You got the number.

He walks into the bedroom.

int.  AleX'S APARTMENT, Bedroom - NIGHT

Alex puts a CD into his boom box that lies atop a cheap thrift store night stand.  The slow sounds of Uncle Tupelo's, "Anodyne" sing out of the speakers.

He staggers into the bedroom and leans against the dresser and stares into the mirror.  He surveys the articles that describe his past problems.

He picks up the pack of cigarettes and reaches into a drawer and pulls out a Zippo lighter.  He lights the cigarette and takes a long drag while putting the pack of cigarettes into his pants pocket.

He fights back tears, they eventually overwhelm him.  He puts the cigarette out on the dresser, right next to the last butt he extinguished. 

Alex pauses for a second, listening to the music.  He then picks up a razor blade from the dresser and slowly puts a deep cut into his left arm.

aLEX

Ahhh!

He finishes cutting himself and a calm comes over him.  The tears stop and lets out a long deep exhale of breath.

int.  Jan's apartment - day

The doorbell rings.  MARSHA ALLEN, a young good-looking woman in her mid-twenties, lies on the couch in the nice-sized, but cluttered city apartment.  On the coffee table lies a bag of cocaine with some pot spread out on a tin can lid.  Cigarette butts and roaches lie in the several ash trays which sit on the table.

The doorbell RINGS again and Jan picks herself, slowly off the couch.  She wears nothing but a half-shirt and panties.

She looks through the peep-hole and pauses for a second.

The doorbell RINGS.

Jan messes with the several door locks as the doorbell RINGS yet again.  She opens the door and Alex stands there waiting impatiently. 

marsha

Who are you?

aLEX

Alex Barrows.  I called last night.

marSHA

You should have come by.

Alex makes his way into the doorway.

aLEX

Can I come in?

marSHA

You a cop?

aLEX

Like I said last night, I'm just helping a friend out.  A missing persons thing.

marshA

You're not a cop?

Alex takes a deep breath.

aLEX

No.

She motions him inside.

They walk into the living room.  Alex stands near the couch and eyes the assortment of narcotics on the table.

Marsha heads for the kitchen.

marshA

Want a drink?

aLEX

No.  Uh, no.

int.  JAN'S APARTMENT, kitchen - DAY

She pulls a glass out of the cupboard and reaches into the refrigerator. 

marsha 

It's your loss.

She pulls out a container and pours herself a Bloody Mary.

Alex (o.s.)

Uh.  Basically I just want to know where your roommate is.

int.  jAN'S APARTMENT - DAY

Marsha walks into the room and sits down, cross-legged, in a chair opposite Alex so that the drugs lie between them.

marSHA

Your guess is a good as mine, man. 

She bends over and looks for a place on the table to set her drink.

Alex pushes the bag of coke out of the way and winces.

aLEX

When was the last time you saw her?

marSHA

I don't know.  A couple of days.  I work days normally and she bartends so, you know?

Alex pulls out a cigarette and lights it.

aLEX

What about a boyfriend?

MarSHA

She's always got one.  She'll stay with him sometimes.

He flicks some ashes in an ashtray and sees a large half-smoked joint in it.

aLEX

You got a number.

marSHA

I might.  He moves around a lot.

They stare at each other for a moment.

aLEX

Can you get the number?

Marsha shrugs.

marSHA

OK.

She gets up slowly and heads into the kitchen.

marSHA

Hey come in here a second.

Alex takes a large drag and then puts his cigarette out in an ashtray.

He walks into the kitchen.

int.  jAN'S APARTMENT, KITCHEN - DAY

She points to a number on the kitchen wall.  There are several numbers scrawled on the wall in different types of ink and handwriting.

marSHA

You think that's a five or a six?

alEX

Which one?

She gets closer to him and puts her finger on the number.

MarSHA

This one.

They look into each other's eyes and lean towards each other as if they are going to kiss.

She caresses his arm and moves the sleeve of his shirt up his arm to reveal the fresh scar.

mArshA

What happened to you?

He rubs her face.

aLEX

Nothing.

MARSHA

That doesn't look good.

aLEX

Do you always keep so many drugs around?

She takes a step back.

marSHA

No I don't, officer.

Alex takes a deep breath.

aLEX

Where did Jan work?

marSHA

You better go, I've got things to do today.

She turns to leave.

He grabs her arm.

aLEX

Where did she work, Marsha?

MarSHA

I, uh...

She tries to pull away, but Alex hangs on to her arm.

marSHA

Manford's Pelican.

Alex lets go.

MarSHA

What do you mean did?

aLEX

Huh?

MARSHA

You said, "Where DID she work."

aLEX

I did?

marshA

Yeah, you did.  Is she dead?

aLEX

Well, no.  Maybe.  I'm trying to find out. 

marSHA

There was this guy.

aLEX

From the Pelican?

marSHA

No, some other place she worked.  They went out once or twice.  Anyway, he'd been following her around.

alEX

Recently or...

Alex takes out a note pad.

mArshA

No.  He stopped about a year ago, but he was super creepy.

AlEX

A year ago.

marSHA

As far as I know.

aleX

You don't see her much.

marSHA

Right.

He jots some information on the pad.

aLEX

The boyfriend, what's his name?

marshA

I don't know.  It's been a while.

aLEX

No.  The current man.

marSHA

Oh.  Uh, Terry.  Terry Marshall.

aLEX

Is that who you buy from?

marSHA

Let yourself out.

She walks into her bedroom.

Alex pushes his sleeve back down and heads to the front door.

int.  moM'S CAFE - DAY

Murphy and Walker sit opposite each other in a booth in the cafe.  Murphy holds a menu and studies it intensely. 

Walker looks at him and laughs.

walKER

Murphy, you have the same thing every time.

Murphy peers over the menu.

muRPHY

Not true.  Sometimes I don't get the soup.

Mom approaches their booth and pulls out her pad.

moM

Hello guys. 

muRPHY

Hello darlin'.  Because you look so good today, I'm gonna have the special.

moM

The special's tuna.

muRPHY

So.

Murphy smiles at Mom.

moM

You won't like it.  I'll make you the club like always.

She turns to Walker and puts her hand on his shoulder.

moM

I made it special just like you asked.

walKER

I really appreciate this, ma'am.

muRPHY

Edna, what's this? 

moM

Don't get all jealous Henry. 

wAlkER

I gave her one of my mother's recipes.

moM

For tamales.  We'll see if it's any good.

Mom walks back to the kitchen.

muRPHY

How can eat that Mexican stuff.  It kills my stomach.

walKER

When did you ever eat Mexican food?

muRPHY

They got a Taco Bell Avenue City.

Walker laughs.

muRPHY

Can't you make that stuff at home?

walKER

I could.

muRPHY

Lazy damn Mexican.

Walker laughs a bit harder.

Mom arrives and sets the food plates down on the table.

moM

What so funny?

Murphy shrugs.

int.  Manford's Pelican Bar - day

The bar is empty save for an OLDER LADY who plays with an umbrella at the end of the bar.

The bartender, Manford, is cleaning glasses at the end of the bar.

Alex stands, slumped on the bar.

older lady

She was nice.

manford

(To the Older Lady)

You never met her. 

(To Alex)

She only worked nights.

older LADY

A gorgeous creature.

manforD

She in trouble?

olDER LADY

She gave me a plant once.

aLEX

Maybe.

manford

I bet it's that Terry guy.

oldER LADY

It was a fern.  Big one.

Alex glances at the Lady.

aLEX

What do you know about him?

manfORD

I've been sober for a year now, I don't want any trouble.  Got it?

aLEX

Right.

manford

This guy was big time, then his source got whacked by a cop or something.  He's been out of control ever since.

older LADY

(To Alex)

Weren't you on TV?

aLEX

Really.

lyLE

Yeah, I've kicked him out of here about ten times.

aLEX

Know where he might be?

manford

No.

olDER LADY

(To herself)

It was like a court show or something.

alEX

Jan ever mention going back home?

manford

No.

aLEX

She ever mention her home town?

manford

No.

aLEX

Ever?

manford

Never.

older LADY

That fern, it died.

Alex gets up and walks away.  His hand grazes the rail of the bar.  He spins back.

alEX

Tell you what, gimme a beer.

Manford places a bottle on the bar.

ext.  city street - dusk

Walker stands at a pay phone.

walKER

Hello.  No sir, I need to speak with someone about obtaining some telephone records. 

He nods.

walKER

I'll hold.

Ext.  manfORD'S PELICAN BAR - night

It's raining hard.   The streets are busy with traffic, human and mechanical.

TOMMY REAGAN runs across the street, seemingly hitting every puddle.  He is a man in his late thirties who wears a closely cropped beard.  He wears a baseball cap and a long raincoat over his business clothes.  He wears a vividly colored shirt with the collar open down mid-way to his navel.  Several gold necklaces hang from his neck.  Lots of rings adorn his hands. 

He pushes through the pack of people right outside the door.

int.  maNFORD'S PELICAN BAR - night

Tommy pushes through the door.  Several people block the entrance.  He calmly pushes them aside.  He takes off his ball cap and jacket and gives them a good shake.  The people near him get a little wet.

Bar Patron

Hey jackass!

Tommy shakes his head and walks towards the bar.  Manford is still holding down the fort.

Tommy shake his hand to get Lyle's attention.  Manford walks towards him.  A YOUNG WOMAN leaves at the end of the bar to reveal Alex, still sitting there involved in a game of Yahtzee.

tOMMY

Motherfucker!

manFORD

That's it, you're out of here, buddy.

Tommy gets distracted.  He reaches into his pocket and pulls out a hundred dollar bill and hands it to Manford.

ToMMY

No hard feelings.

Manford raises the bill to the light to inspect it.

Tommy fights through the crowd towards Alex. 

tOMMY

Looking for a game?

Alex gives a quick look up and starts to fall off his stool. The dice he's holding go flying.

Tommy catches the stool and prevents Alex from taking a spill.

tOMMY

Saved your ass again, kiddo.

Tommy picks up two dice on the floor.

Alex regains his composure, a bit, and sits up.  He swivels on his stool to square up with Tommy.

AleX

Tommy, what the fuck?  I got your message, but I've been busy.

tOMMY

You look good.  I guess forty-eight hours in jail doesn't really drain the body like it used to.

alEX

That's the past.

toMMY

How're you doing, Al?

Alex reaches into his pocket and pulls out his pack of cigarettes.  He searches through the pack.  No more cigs.  He crumples of the pack and sets it on the bar.

aLEX

Let's get out of here.

Tommy rolls the two dice.

tOMMY

Seven.

aLEX

So what.

Alex stumbles as he gets off his chair.

Tommy pockets the dice and follows him out the door.

ext.  MANFORD'S PELICAN BAR - NIGHT

The rain is coming down in sheets now.

Alex stands several feet from the bar's awning, getting soaked.

Tommy walks out the door and stands at the edge of the awning.

toMMY

This is ridiculous, let's go inside.

Alex keeps staring straight ahead.

aLEX

Ask me, how I'm doing?

tOMMY

C'mon. 

No response.

Tommy shrugs his shoulders.

tOMMY

How are you doing?

Alex turns to Tommy.

aLEX

I can't hear you.  You'll have to come closer.

Tommy shakes his head in disgust.

tOMMY

(To himself)

Fine.

Tommy walks out from under the awning and into the downpour.  He puts his mouth near Alex's ear.

TOMMY

How the fuck are you doing, man!

Alex starts to walk away.

Tommy stands where is.

ToMMY

Now what?

The CRACK of lightning bursts through the air.

Alex walks back up to Tommy and throws a lightning quick punch that lands square on Tommy's nose, sending him reeling.  Tommy lands in the middle of the wet street.  Right in a puddle, that he had so skillfully avoided, minutes earlier.

Alex stands over him, shaking his punching hand over and over.

aLEX

Ow.  Fuck.  Thanks for askin'.  I'm not doing all that well.

Tommy doesn't reply, he just keeps rubbing his jaw.

Alex continues to shake his hand.

aLEX

You got some nerve trying to buddy up with me.

Tommy spits a bunch of blood onto the ground.

ToMMY

It was all a mistake.

AleX

You're pathetic.

toMMY

You chipped my fuckin' tooth.

alEX

And you ruined my life.  We're even.

int.   Saint luke's hospital, tech room - day

Walker enters the sterile white room.

Marsha is sitting behind a microscope, looking rather disheveled.

marSHA

You from path?

wALKER

Path?

marSHA

I'm almost done.  Hang on a sec.

She peers into the microscope.

wALKER

I'm sorry, ma'am.  I ain't from path or wherever.

She looks up.

marSHA

You're not from pathology.

wALKER

No ma'am.  I'm from Andrew County.  Sheriff's office.

mArSHA

Is this about Jan again?

wALKER

Yes.  And no.

marSHA

Well one of your guys already got me.

wALKER

Yeah, that was Alex.  He's actually working on his own officially.

marSHA

Then what do you want?

wALKER

Did Alex act strange?

MarsHA

What?

wALKER

Was he on something?  I mean, do you think?

mArsHA

He didn't act normal.

Marsha walks over to the doorway.

wALKER

I'm sorry for asking this.  Did you two do any drinkin' or druggin'?

marSHA

I don't do drugs.  But he was on something, that's for sure.

wALKER

What did Alex say?

marSHA

He just kept going on about how much he wanted to get a hold of Jan.

wALKER

I appreciate your time.

marSHA

Whatever.

She leaves.

Walker watches her leave, like any red-blooded American would.  He looks at the microscope and peers into the eyepiece.

int.  trailer - day

Beth walks over to Lionel's dead body.  It sits leaned up against a wall.  She bends him forward and puts a collared shirt on him.

bETH

You got a funeral today and this time you're wearing that suit my Daddy gave us.

She continues to dress the dead body.  She buttons the shirt.  She grabs a ties from the floor and straddles the body from behind and ties the tie from behind Lionel's body. 

ext.  meadow oaks cemetery - day

Alex drives through the maze of narrow roads squirming through the cemetery.  He holds a piece of paper that looks at and then sets on the passenger seat.  He drives to a remote part of the cemetery, where TERRY MARSHALL is driving a tractor, cutting grass.

Alex parks the car and gets out.  He walks over to the tractor.

aLEX

(Yelling)

Terry?

terry

(Equally loud)

What?

aLEX

(Yelling)

I'm looking for Terry...

Terry cuts the motor.

aLEX

Marshall!

teRRY

You don't have to yell, I'm right here.

aLEX

Oh.  Your boss said it'd be cool if I could talk to you for a minute.

terry

OK.

AleX

Where'd you get this gig?

terrY

Probation officer.  He's a wonderful human being.

aLEX

Great.  I need to know the last time you saw Jan Wiley.

terrY

Why?  You a cop?

aLEX

More of a private investigator.  When was the last time?

terrY

It's been a while.  I dumped her ass months ago.

aLEX

When did this happen?

Terry adjusts himself on the tractor seat.

teRRY

Who are you?  Are you her brother?

aLEX

She doesn't have a brother.

terRY

You're starting to piss me off.

aLEX

Look, I'm sorry.  I'm working with the Sheriff's Department up in Andrew County.  There's been a missing person's report filed on Jan.

terRY

I don't know where Andrew County is and I don't talk to cops.

aLEX

I'm not a cop.

terRY

Really.

alex

Do you know who she was seeing after you two split?

teRRY

Will you leave if I tell you?

aLEX

Yeah, sure.

teRRY

I dumped her because she was doing a lot of talking to some guy called Lightning.  I saw him once outside of Donnie's.  Preppy guy.

aLEX

Donnie's.

terrY

It's a strip club.  Don't pretend like you don't know.

aLEX

She danced there?

TeRRY

Couple of times a week.

aLEX

She was only nineteen.

terRY

So?

Alex walks towards his car.

TeRRY

Hey, if you see her, tell I'm pissed, but I'm not that pissed.  You know what I mean?

Alex gets into the car and drives off.

Terry starts the loud tractor mower up.

int.  mANFORD'S PELICAN BAR - DAY

Walker sits in one of the booths with a table full of food.

A television plays the U.S. Open golf tournament.

golf announcer

It doesn't look for Hernandez now.  The kid from the barrio sits now at even par on Saturday, moving day.

The WAITRESS walks over to Walker's table.

Walker points at the screen.

waitress

I got it.  She was supposed to work last night.

waLKER

Check it out!  A Mexican in the U.S. Open.

waiTRESS

You golf?

waLKER

No ma'am.  I just eat.

waiTRESS

Anything else.

walkER

What did you say? 

waitrESS

She never showed.  No one's seen Jan in a week.

walKER

OK.  Thanks.

waiTRESS

You want some more Ketchup?

waLKER

Uh, yeah.  Please.

The waitress picks up an empty ketchup bottle and leaves.

int.  aleX'S APARTMENT - NIGHT

He's sitting on the couch.  The radio plays country music at a low level.  His hair is wet, like he just got out of the shower.  He wears an old T-shirt and some sweat pants.  He enjoys a cigarette, taking long drags.  An ashtray sits precariously on the arm of the couch.

A KNOCK at the door.

Alex quickly puts out the cigarette in the ashtray.  He gets up, but knocks the ashtray off the couch and ashes spill on the floor.

aLEX

Shit.

The KNOCKING continues.

He rubs in the ashes so they are not so readily visible.  He puts the ashtray under the couch.

Alex opens the front door.

aLEX

Walker?

waLKER

Hola.

Alex says nothing.

waLKER

Mind if I come in?

Alex steps back into the apartment.

aLEX

Any news? 

Alex takes a seat in a folding chair across from the couch.

wALKER

Not really.

Walker sits on the couch.

aLEX

I was just about to call the station up there.

Alex looks about the room nervously.

wALKER

I talked to Marsha Allen today, her roommate.

aLEX

Yeah, so did I.

waLKER

She was nice.  Man what a body on her.

alEX

Yeah.

waLKER

She didn't have much to say.

alEX

Did she mention Terry Marshall?  The boyfriend.

Walker fidgets in his seat.

wALKER

Man, I'm thirsty.  You got a beer?

alEX

Just water.

wALKER

Never mind.

alEX

Anyway, I talked to the boyfriend and he told me that she was seeing some guy called Lightning in the past few weeks.

waLKER

Wow.

alEX

Huh?

wALKER

I just can't believe this is Mavis and Buck's daughter.

alEX

You know, all those women on the internet have parents.

wALKER

We don't have the internet yet.  I keep telling Murphy.

alEX

Terry was a drug dealer and I think this Lightning guy is too.  He's from up around Danville.  Marsha seemed to think she went up there to see him quite a bit.

wALKER

Buck said he hadn't seen her in over a year.

Walker gets up and grabs a golf club from Alex's golf bag that is leaning against a corner of the room.

aLEX

You play?

wALKER

No.

Joe begins to swing the club half-speed like a hockey stick.

wALKER

Now, hockey.  That's a sport.

aLEX

Hockey?

wALKER

The gift from the great white north.

aLEX

Aren't you Mexican?

wALKER

My mama was from Western Canada, my papa worked on the pipe lines.

alEX

How the hell did you end up in Danville?

wALKER

Life is a journey with as many twists and turns as you can stomach.

He puts down the club and walks back to the couch and sits.

wALKER

Oh, by the way, she was scheduled to work the night before last, but never showed, never called.

aLEX

Did they find the body?

WALKER

No, no luck.

aLEX

She had a stalker about a year ago, and two boyfriends messed up in narcotics.

wALKER

You know, Alex.   I don't mean to rain on your hospitality, but isn't this getting into some dangerous territory for you?

aLEX

I think we should focus on this Lightning character.

wALKER

She does seem to be missing.  I guess it's back up north.  You want a ride?

Alex slumps in his chair.

aLEX

I'll see you in the morning.

wALKER

After church.

Alex picks up a nice-looking shirt from the floor and models it.

waLKER

Where you goin'?

aLEX

To a strip club, wanna come?

wALKER

No, no.  Maybe you shouldn't either.

aLEX

Jan used to work there.  You come or not.   Whatever.

Walker starts to look around.

aLEX

The phone is in the kitchen.

Walker heads to kitchen.

Alex opens a drawer in a desk in the living room.  He pulls out a wallet and opens it.  In it is a policeman's badge.

int.  the volcano, night club - night

The Volcano is a stereotypical strip club, blaring hip-hop music.

Naked women abound, on stage and on the floor.  Alex and Walker walk amid the THRONG.

A black DANCER wearing nothing but a thong moves in front of Walker.  Alex smiles, while Walker tries not to stare.

aLEX

She likes you.

waLKER

If you believe that...

She rubs her ass against his crotch.

wALKER

Aw jeez.  Let's go ask about Jan.

aLEX

OK.

Walker heads to the backstage area.

Alex grabs a drink off a COCKTAIL WAITRESS' tray and slams it.  He hurries to catch up the large Mexican.

Alex and Walker stand next to a three-hundred pound BOUNCER who stands by the backstage door.

bouncer

Jan, she was called Candy Canes I think.

Alex flashes his badge

aLEX

Can we talk to the girls?  It's important.

The bouncer shrugs.

They walk on.

int.  Backstage at the volcano, night club - night

The long room is lined with mirrors and stools, but women.

walkER

I don't think you should be flashin' that badge around Alex.  I'm an officer of the law, I can't let you...

aLEX

Come out, come out, wherever you are.

Walker eyes an office to his left.

walKER

Hey.

He points to the office.  Alex knocks on the door.  No answer.  He opens it and enters.

int.  office, tHE VOLCANO - NIGHT

A woman, RITA, looks up at them.  She is an attractive middle-aged woman who, to some surprise, is fully dressed.  On the corner of the desk sits a small placard with the name "Leslie" on it.

Rita

I'm busy.

Alex takes out his badge.

aLEX

We hoped to talk to some dancers tonight, Leslie.

riTA

No patrons backstage.

walkER

We're investigating the disappearance of Jan, Candy Canes.

riTA

So.

wALKER

Doesn't a badge mean anything to you?

ritA

You from around here Pedro?

waLKER

No.  I'm a deputy Sheriff from Andrew County.

riTA

Then you're badge don't mean shit to me.

Alex looks impatient.

alEX

Jan Wiley.

riTA

She's gone.

aLEX

Where?

ritA

You don't show up, you're fired

wALKER

Was this typical behavior?

riTA

Typical?  I know a name, Candy Canes.  I don't know anything else about her and neither does anyone else. 

Rita leaves.

Alex looks at Walker.

aLEX

You know, you're a real dick.

wALKER

I'm sorry?

Alex gets in his face.

aLEX

I'm a cop.  Have ever investigated anything in your life other an missing cow or two?

walkER

You don't know what you're talking about.

Alex pushes Walker.

wALKER

I know you.  You're a guy who used to be a cop.  A dirty cop.

Alex takes a swing at Walker.  Walker blocks the punch and displays some fairly quick karate moves and lays a series of blows to Alex's head and body. 

Alex goes down in a heap.

Walker looks at the sky.

He reaches his hand to Alex.

wALKER

I'm sorry partner.

Alex pushes it away. 

aLEX

It's cool.

wALKER

I'll get a cab.

Alex spits out a little blood.

alEX

Cool.

Walker leaves.  Alex remains on the floor.

Rita returns.

rITA

Son-of-a-bitch!  You got pig blood on my floor.

Alex doesn't move.

She kicks him

RitA

Get out.  Get out!

Alex gets up.

int.  sherIFF'S OFFICE - DAY

Alex sits on top of a desk, his face swollen, going through the pile of old yearbooks.

Walker enters, wearing an ill-fitting suit.

aLEX

Did you pray for me?

wALKER

I did.

aLEX

Where's Murphy?  At church?

Walker

He hasn't been going.

Walker comes behind the counter, takes off his jacket and pulls up a chair.  Large sweat stains appear under each of his armpits.

wALKER (cont'd)

I asked around at church about this Lightning guy.

alEX

And?

WALKER

Nothing.  Could be another dead end.

aLEX

Maybe it's someone with a similar last name.

wALKER

That's no one I know.

Murphy walks in through the back room.  He is dressed casually with  his sheriff's badge pinned on a golf shirt and his gun belt around his waist.

aLEX

Don't believe in God anymore Murphy?

muRPHY

I believe in God and once saved, always saved.

aLEX

You better hope.

walkER

Real funny.

(beat)

Hey chief.  Ever heard of a guy around here named Lightning?

muRPHY

I don't believe I've heard this one.

aLEX

It's not a joke.  Jan was seeing a guy called Lightning before she disappeared.

Murphy heads to the coffee maker and grabs a cup of coffee.

murPHY

Well I can't say I know anyone with that name.  So how's the mystery going?

Alex and Walker give each other a solemn look.

alEX

Well Walker, what do you think?

wALKER

I think she's gone.

muRPHY

Dead gone or just gone, gone.

waLKER

No one's seen her down in K.C. and no one's heard a peep.

muRPHY

But we've got no body.  We might have to bring in the State Police.

aLEX

Shit, Murphy.  Just give me a day and I'll track down Lightning.  I'm sure he's involved in drug dealing and if he is, I can find him.

muRPHY

You realize we can't just walk up to these guys and say, "Hey, you're on drugs and we think you killed a girl."

aLEX

Why not?

walKER

For one thing, there's no body.

Alex gets up and pours himself a coffee.

aLEX

We've got to search the area again and talk to someone who knows everybody.  Knows everybody's business.

Murphy holds up The Gazette, the local paper and points to the masthead.

ext.  scott house - day

Around the side of the two-story monster, Mary Scott, a frail old woman, is flipping burgers on the smoker.

Alex begins to cough as he sees her.  She turns and spots him.

mary

Hello.  Can I help you.

Alex walks closer to her.

aLEX

Sorry to interrupt your party, but there was no one at the paper.

mary

Wow, who got a hold of you?

Alex rubs his shiner.

alEX

No one really.

mary

Well, there's no party, this is for me.  As for the paper, it's Sunday.

alEX

Right.

mary

You're gonna have to come by the office on Monday.

aLEX

Ma'am my name is...

mary

I know who you are and if you don't want any trouble you best get moving.

Alex laughs.

Mary

What's so funny?

aLEX

I'm surprised you know me.

mary

Know you?  You're the boy who caught the Thinsulate work boot in the county fish off in eighty-two.

alex

How do you remember that stuff?

mary

I learned a long time ago, and I mean a long time ago, that there are things you'll never want to forget and things you'll never need to remember.  So forget those and remember the others.  You listening?

aLEX

Uh, yeah.

mary

Want some lunch?

She holds out the plate of burgers.

aLEX

Well, I wasn't going to stay...

mary

Quit being so damned polite and take the plate.

He takes the plate and they walk into the house.

int.  scott house, kitchen - day

Alex and Mary sit at the kitchen table of the large house.  Mary's husband, CHARLES, is sleeping with a fork in his hand at the table.

Alex laughs.

aLEX

Is he alright?

mary

Sure.  Heaven forbid he try and stay awake for more than ten minutes at a time.  How's your Mom and Dad?

Alex takes a bite of his burger, but can't help looking at the catatonic in front of him.

aLEX

Fine.  They're fine.  Business is good.

mary

You bet it is.  I call for reservations just for lunch.

aLEX

They take reservations?

mary

No, but it doesn't hurt to call.

Mary gets up and grabs both hers and Alex's water glasses.  She refills both of them with iced tea that's sitting on the counter.

mary

So, in getting to the point, who do you want to find?

aLEX

Do you remember anyone who went by the nickname, "Lightning"?  

Mary

What?

aLEX

Or someone who had a name close to that?

mary

Lightning?

alEX

Anyone?

She sits back down.  She crosses her legs like a man.

mary

Lightning.

alEX

If you can't think of it now, maybe...

mary

That does sound familiar.

She starts eating her burger.  Alex waits for more out of her, but she continues eating.

Alex, after a minute, goes back to eating himself.

int.  SheRIFF'S OFFICE - DAY

Alex staggers into the office, holding his stomach.  The radio is on, tuned to the U.S. Open golf tournament.

radio announcer (o.s)

This is it.  What a final surge by Hernandez.  Three putts to be the first native Mexican to win the U.S. Open.

Murphy and Walker are eating at their desks.

murPHY

You OK?

Alex sits down in a chair and cringes.

alEX

I ate too much.

Walker winks at Murphy.

wALKER

Mary's burgers.

Murphy smiles.

murPHY

I got Lyle to help us do some more searching tomorrow.

radIO ANNOUNCER (o.s.)

There it is.  Juan Hernandez is your new U.S. Open champion.

Alex nods.

wALKER

Yes!

Walker claps his hands.

murPHY

Your boy did it.

Murphy wipes his mouth with a napkin.

wALKER

(To Alex)

She know's Lightning?

Alex leans back in the chair.

aLEX

She couldn't remember.

waLKER

What?

radIO ANNOUNCEr (o.s.)

A thrilling victory for golf fans everywhere.

alEX

She'll call us tomorrow if she comes across anything at the paper.

muRPHY

That old woman can remember what I wore on my wedding day forty years ago.

aLEX

She said it sounded familiar.

wALKER

I bet he ain't from around here after all.

alEX

He's from somewhere around here.

muRPHY

(To himself)

She couldn't remember.

ext.  near lionel's trailer - day

Beth drags Lionel's nattily attired dead body in wheel barrow along a ridge, not far from the trailer.  A shovel rests atop Lionel's body.

The day is almost over and from this vantage point the lake is almost directly below the ridge, about fifty feet down an embankment.  The lake is one of those lakes with lots of dead tree stumps sticking out of the water.

Beth gets tired and sets the wheel barrow down.  The shovel falls off, a few feet from the wheel barrow.

bETH

I hate funerals, Lionel.  Did you know that?

She bends down to get the shovel, but loses control of the wheel barrow and it starts to tip over.  She tries to catch the wheel barrow and manages to grab one of the handles, but the body falls out and caroms down the embankment. 

Beth falls down, muddying herself as the wheel barrow falls on her.

beTH

Ouch!

The body makes a loud splash. 

She rolls over and looks over the edge of the embankment.  The body does not surface.

ext.  lake, under water - day

Lionel's body is impaled on a tree stump that does not quite extend to the water's surface.

The body lays motionless, mere feet from view.

ext.  NEAR LIONEL'S TRAILER - DAY

Beth rolls around in the mud, laughing.

ext.  back street, downtown Danville - night

Alex walks down a back street, not far from the town square.  He carries a bottle of whisky in a brown paper bag.  A cigarette dangles from his mouth.

He comes across a small bar.  It is located in a building with no windows, just a small painted sign saying, "Bar".

Alex nears the entrance.  Ralph, a long haired bearded man with a tatoo on his arm that says, "Tough guy" meets him in the doorway.

ralph

No cops and no cons in here.

Alex tries to walk past him.

Ralph blocks his path.  The door is partially open.

ralPH

You're both, so skedaddle.

aLEX

Thanks a lot Ralph.

Ralph closes the door.

aLEX

I never did fix that parking ticket.

The cigarette falls out of his mouth.

Alex continues to walk down the street.

He takes a large swig from his bottle as he walks.

int.  barrow's house - night

Alex walks through the front door as his mother ascends the stairs.

A look of relief comes across Mom's face.

mom

Good.  You're home.

aLEX

Yeah.  Home.  I'm home.

MOM

Let me get you some coffee.  My God, your eye.

Mom rubs his face.  Alex recoils a bit.

aLEX

No coffee.  It's not good for you.

Mom sighs.

moM

So what have you and Murphy been doing?

aLEX

What?

mom

Well, I'm asking.  I know you've been hanging around the sheriff's office.

aLEX

What do you care?

mom

Is that any way to talk to your mother?

Alex collapses at the foot of the stairwell.

mom

Alex.  You're gonna wake your father.

alEX

Good.  Wake his ass up.

moM

No. Nobody wants that.  This is my only free time I get in the house away from him.

alEX

So go ahead, ask me.

moM

Ask you what?

aLEX

Oh come on.  Ask me what you've been dying to ask me all along.

moM

Alex, I really don't know what you're talking about.

aLEX

You want to know if I'm a drug addict.  If I'm a cheater, a liar.  Don't you?

moM

Please keep it down.  I'll get some coffee.

He grabs her arm.

aLEX

I fucked up.  I snorted the coke, I made some mistakes.  You ever make a mistake Mom?

Tears begin to flow from Mom's eyes.

moM

Oh Alex, everyday.

aLEX

I made one.  And now my whole life is fucked.

mom

Maybe you can get a job with Murphy.  You could stay here until you saved up a little money.

aLEX

Why don't I just kill myself right now.

She begins to cry in earnest.

mom

Don't talk like this.

aleX

I'm tired.

moM

Let's go to bed.

Mom kisses Alex on the cheek and walks up the stairs.

Alex leans back on the stairs and closes his eyes.

int.  andrew county gazette - day

Mary is sitting at her desk, legs crossed man-style, and puffing on a Virginia Slim.

Alex enters her office.  His shiner looking better than the day before, but still very noticeable.  Before he can get a word out, Mary holds her hand up, stopping his progress.

Mary

Stop right there.  I'd thought I said I'd call.

aLEX

Mary, Mary.  I couldn't stand to be away from you any longer.

mary

Good for you.  Don't let the truth stand in your way.

aLEX

Do you have anything for me?

mary

Well I think I have your name, and I didn't have to use this damn thing.

She slaps her computer monitor.

Alex opens his mouth to speak, but Mary beats him to the punch.

mary

I was flipping channels last night and I landed on ESPN.  They had some replays of a basketball game.  There was some little fella, don't know who he plays for, but he's faster than a monkey.

She raises her hand at Alex.

mary

No racial slur intended.  I see this young man and I started to think about your fella, Lightning. 

aLEX

Yeah.

mary

Back in the seventies, we had a hell of a high school basketball team.  Finished sixth in the state.  Your cousin was on it.

aLEX

Jimmy?

mary

No, Justin from your Dad's side.

aLEX

Oh, yeah.

mary

There was a kid on that team that our sportswriter used to call lightning.  He didn't play a lot, but he made the basket that won the district tournament.

She holds up an old clipping, that reads, "Lightning wins it!"

aLEX

So he went by "Lightning".

Alex takes the clipping from her.

mary

Probably.

aLEX

Lightning Lionel Langley.

mary

That's him.

Alex stretches out his hand to Mary.

mary (cont'd)

Must be official business if we're shaking hands.

alEX

Thanks ma'am. 

mary

Just tell your Mom to give me a free lunch.

alEX

I'll try.

Alex walks out the office door.

mary

You owe me mister.

int.  shERIFF'S OFFICE - DAY

Murphy and Walker are sitting around, drinking coffee.

Alex walks in on them.

murPHY

Alex.  We've been waiting for you.  Walker, call Lyle and tell him we're on.

aLEX

Look Murphy, I got a name on Lightning.  Lionel Langley.

wALKER

That guy?

muRPHY

Lionel?  That's right.  He played ball on that state championship team.

alEX

They finished sixth.

murPHY

No, I think they won it.

wALKER

That guy was in here not too long ago.  Him and his wife.

murPHY

I don't think they're married Walker.  She was beat up pretty bad that night.

wALKER

She can take care of herself.  She whipped the poor bastard upside his head with little twenty-two.

muRPHY

Those two are kinda strange.

waLKER

So how we gonna handle this Murphy?

muRPHY

What do you think Alex?

Alex walks over to where Murphy is sitting.

alEX

Let's just go ask them a couple questions.

muRPHY

Talk to both of them?

aLEX

Separately.  If she's not too bright, she could let something slip.

walKER

Or she could slap that twenty-two upside your head.

Alex turns towards Walker.

alEX

I've had worse. 

ext.  front yard, Beth & lionel's trAILER - DAY

Murphy and Alex pull up in the Sheriff's squad car.

The front yard is covered with shabby old lawn ornaments, but not much grass.  Mostly tall weeds and dandelions.

They open the chain linked gate, which almost falls off it's rusty hinges.

Alex knocks on the front door.

Beth opens it wearing only a bathrobe.  Her hair is done up, but she is remarkably cleaner and more well kept than before.  She sees Murphy's uniform and starts to shake. 

beth

Hello?

alEX

Are you Beth Langley?

beth

No.  I'm Beth Hunt.

aLEX

Is Lionel in ma'am?

She shirks back into the doorway a bit.

beTH

No.

murpHY

Beth, can we come in for a second?

beth

He ain't here.

aLEX

I know, Ms. Hunt.  Can we speak to you for a moment?

beTH

I guess I have to right?

murPHY

Well, no you...

aleX

That's right you do.

She opens the door for them and they enter.

int. tRAILER - DAY

As messy as the trailer was before, it is now noticeably cleaner.  A bucket and mop sit in the middle of the kitchen. 

Murphy and Alex are led into the living room where there is a mantle over a faux fire place.  A box overflowing with sports trophies and memorabilia sit in it.

Alex and Murphy share a look as they notice the mantle.

Walker sits down on the old couch.

Beth, seeing Murphy, sits on the edge of an uncomfortable looking almost antique chair.  Alex stands, looking through the box of memorabilia.

wALKER

When do you expect your old man back, Beth?

bETH

He left.

wALKER

Well when do you think he'll be coming back.

Beth smiles.

bETH

He ain't coming back.

wALKER

What do you mean, ma'am?

Beth's hands both rest on her face.

bETH

What I said.  He won't be back in this place.

Alex turns around and faces Beth, who is looking right into Walker's eyes.

aLEX

What happened?

She answers Alex, but doesn't look at him.

beTH

He left and said he's never coming back.

aLEX

When did all this happen?

waLKER

He's left before hasn't he, Beth?

Beth drops her hand.

bETH

When he leaves, in the past, he'd threaten to come back.  Not this time.

alEX

When did you have this confrontation?

bETH

Do you know where he is?

wALKER

I figured you'd might know his whereabouts.

beTH

No.  No way.

alEX

Is there anything you can tell us about where Lionel might be?

beTH

Can you all just leave me alone?  I don't know nothing.

Alex bends down on his knee and looks Beth in the eye.  She turns her head to avoid eye contact.  Alex leans in so his face is very close to hers.

aLEX

You seem kind of nervous.

She slams her foot against the couch and begins swinging her arms.

bETH

I ain't got no more time to talk.  It's one-fifty five.

aLEX

So?

She stops swinging her arms.

bETH

You sound just like Lionel.

Alex opens his shirt pocket and pulls out a small photo.  It is a posed picture of Jan Wiley.

Alex takes the picture and puts it in front of Beth's face.

aLEX

Have you ever seen this girl before?

Her eyes widen.  She turns her back on her guests and sits down on the couch.  She grabs the remote off the coffee table and flips on the television.

Alex flashes a quizzical look to Walker, who rolls his eyes.

aLEX

Ma'am?

Beth gathers herself in a more comfortable position in her chair.

BeTH

My stories come on at two. 

Alex shakes his head and leans back.

wALKER

Sure.  That's why we want you to take another look at the picture.  Then we'll go.

Beth's lip begins to quiver.  She tries to stop it, but it only shakes harder.  Her eyes are clouding up.

beTH

What's the matter with her?

Alex stands up and looks down on her.

aLEX

Nothing.

wALKER

What?

aLEX

Have you seen this girl in the last few weeks?

Beth says nothing.

aLEX

Did Lionel know this woman?

No response from Beth.  She sits, staring at the television.

walKER

Beth?  Do you think he was seeing this woman?

beTH

They're not around here anymore.

Walker sits up in the couch.

walkER

How?  Why?

bETH

I'm his wife. I know these things.

aLEX

You're not married.

Walker flashes Alex a look of death.

wALKER

When your husband left, was he with her?

She starts to cry.

bETH

Yes.

aLEX

Lionel was having an affair with her?

Another angry look from Walker directed at Alex.

Alex walks to the other side of the room.

She covers her ears with her hands and clinches her eyes shut.

wALKER

Beth?

bETH

I know it.  I knew it. 

Alex plops his body down on the couch.

int.  Walker's squad car - day

Alex and Walker drive silently back towards town.  Walker stares at the road.  Alex snacks on a chocolate bar.

After a minute or so of silence.

waLKER

I'm gonna check on some phone records.

alEX

I'm hungry.

int.  mom's cafe - day

Alex sits, sunglasses on, in a far booth.

Mom stands over the table, pouring him some coffee into his empty cup.

moM

Why can't you tell me what's up?

Alex looks up at his mother.

aLEX

Not now.  Maybe later.  Maybe never.  OK?

moM

You're breaking my heart.

She walks away.

WILT, the fattest man in town, waddles into the cafe.  He looks around and seems confused.

aLEX

Wilt!

Wilt doesn't hear Alex, who is behind him.  Wilt shakes his head and sits down in a booth, facing away from Alex.  Wilt can barely fit in the booth.  He has to push the table away from the booth to sit.

aLEX

Wilt!

He doesn't hear Alex.

Alex, grudgingly gets up and walks over to where Wilt is sitting.  Alex puts his arm on Wilt's shoulder.

alEX

Wilt.

Wilt looks up and sees Alex.

wilt

Well, look there.  I ain't seen you since I kicked you and Johnny out of my place.  When was that?

aLEX

I don't know.  I'm sitting over there, bud.

Wilt looks over to the booth that Alex had been occupying.

wiLT

I ain't gettin' up again.  Have a seat.

aLEX

Let me get my coffee.

Wilt grabs Alex by the shirt.

wiLT

I'm kinda in a hurry.

Alex turns around and attempts to sit down.  There is very little room between the booth opposite Wilt and the table.  Alex winces as he squeezes into the tight spot.

wiLT

Gaining a little weight there?

aLEX

Yeah, something like that.

wiLT

How's your Daddy?

aLEX

He's fine.

wiLT

Ain't seen him in here in awhile.

aLEX

Good to see you, Wilt.

Mom walks over to the table.

moM

What'll it be?

wiLT

Alex you want anything?

aLEX

Just my coffee, Mom.

moM

Wilt?

wiLT

Gimme a large chocolate milk and a lettuce salad.

moM

OK.

Mom heads back to behind the cafe counter.

aLEX

Cool.  Say Wilt, you know Lionel Langley?

wiLT

Yeah, Lightning comes into my place every once in a while.

aLEX

Seen him lately?

Wilt giggles a bit.

wiLT

You wanna kick his ass?

Alex rubs his bruised face.

aLEX

Don't plan on it.

WiLT

Well I don't give a shit one way or another.  You know, I ain't seen him in a couple of weeks.

Wilt points to the window at the corner of the diner.  Beth is tucked away behind the window, paint on the window blocking most of her body.  Only her face is visible.

WiLT

Why don't you ask his wife?

aLEX

I saw her earlier actually.

wiLT

Well I think she's following you then.

aLEX

What?

Wilt points again.

Alex turns his head and looks behind him.

aLEX

Huh.

Alex looks at Wilt.

aLEX

Stay here for a second.

wiLT

I don't even have my food yet.

Alex squeezes out of his tight spot.

aLEX

Right.

Alex walks towards the door.  He sees Beth run off.

Alex runs out the door.

ext.  outside mom's cafe - day

Alex runs after Beth, who wears large bulky cowboy boots and a long sun dress.

aLEX

Beth!

She turns the corner and slips on the concrete and falls.

bETH

Ow!

Alex bends down to help her, she jumps like a scared cat.

aLEX

It's only me.  Don't worry.  You OK?

She sits up and pats away the dirt off herself.  She takes an exaggerated deep breath to regain her composure.

bETH

He ain't come back yet, mister.

Alex grabs her arm and helps her back to her feet.

aLEX

Let's just talk.

bETH

About what?

aLEX

About you.

bETH

I told you, I ain't done nothing.

aLEX

Right.  I know.  I can imagine how you feel.

bETH

Huh?

aLEX

Look, I can tell you've been hurting since he ran off.

bETH

Who?

Alex is confused by her question.

aLEX

Uh, Lionel.

Beth begins to look around, as if she's keeping a look-out.

beTH

Yeah, he's gone.

aLEX

Yeah, yeah, I know.  That's why I'm sorry.  Jeez.  I doubt if you know, but I lost something too.

bETH

What?

aLEX

My job, my life.  Both really.

beTH

What happened?

aLEX

Well, there were some things out of my control, actually.  I didn't do some things I should have done.  Vice versa.

bETH

Yeah, me too.

aLEX

Is that why he left?

bETH

He did some things.  I was a prisoner, but now I'm on parole. 

Alex stares at her, a melancholic look in his eyes.

Beth, wanting to say something, leans forward, but at the last moment, she takes a step back and looks down the street. 

Alex grabs her arm and brings her closer to him.

aLEX

Do you know what redemption is, Beth?

bETH

I guess.

Alex stares into her eyes.

bETH

What does it mean?

aLEX

When you can right a wrong.  Get it?

beTH

I don't know.

aLEX

Do you love Lionel?

Beth doesn't hesitate.

BETH

No.

Alex grabs her with both arms.

aLEX

You are my redemption.

Beth tries to squirm away from Alex.

bETH

How'd I do that?

Alex lets go of her. 

She looks at him for a brief second, then runs off. 

Alex stands on the street corner.  He reaches into his pocket and pulls out a pack of cigarettes.  It is the last one in the pack.  He lights the cigarette with a cheap looking K.C. Chiefs labelled Bic lighter.  A large burst of wind makes him squint, when the dust blows into his eyes.

int.  sheriFF'S OFFICE - DAY

Walker is standing at the fax machine, tapping his fingers against the plastic.  He HUMS under his breath, an unrecognizable tune.

The transmission begins to roll out.

The top of the first sheet contains large bold letters.  It reads, "AT&T Detail of Phone Record."

Walker waits casually for the rest of the transmission, completing the song, known only to him.

He takes the papers and heads over to his desk.  He tips his chair back and props his feet up while he takes a swig of coffee.

He begins to read.

He stops suddenly.  His chair slams to the floor and his feet his the ground, spilling coffee all over the desk.

wALKER

Crap!

He absentmindedly takes some of the phone records and sets them on spilled coffee. He see what he is doing and immediately stops.

wALKER

Uh, oh.

He grabs an old shirt from his desk and wipes up the mess.

The phone records are piled up at the corner of his desk.  Some of the papers are wrinkled from being wet.

He looks through the papers again.  This time he grabs a yellow hi-lighter from his desk and begins crossing over the number "535-8259" the many times it appears on the page.

ext.  town square - day

Walker races through the town, balls out, like Bullitt.

He ignores an on-coming car and narrowly avoids a collision.  Dust flies up, but Walker turns on the flashing lights on his squad car and motors on.

int.  mom'S CAFE - DAY

Walker bursts in, totally out of breath.

wALKER

(To everyone)

Where's Alex?!

The only people around are Alex's mother and Wilt, who now sits at the counter.

wiLT

What's up, Walker?

wALKER

Where is he?

WilT

Who?

Mom walks over to where Walker is standing.

moM

Do you want Alex?

Walker nods.

moM (cont'd)

He went running out of here a while back.  Do you want me to call home?

Walker runs out the door.

Mom turns to Wilt.

mom

I hope Alex isn't drinking.

Wilt pushes his coffee cup towards her.

She pours him a fresh cup and displays her patented worried look.

ext.  towN SQUARE - DAY

Walker is still running hard, but he begins to slow.  A confused look comes across his face.  A perplexed look.  An angry look.

He starts to run again.   But not as fast and he doesn't concentrate on his actions, so his limbs begins to flail and his shirt comes un-tucked. 

Suddenly, he grabs his side.  Overcome by pain, Walker sits down at a park bench in the courtyard of the town square.

int.  alEX'S APARTMENT - NIGHT - flashback

Walker picks up the phone in the hallway.  Alex lies on the couch.

Walker takes a closer look at the phone.

wALKER

I gonna give 'em my number here.  Is this it on the phone?

aLEX (o.s.)

Nah.  That's the old one.  The new one's on the phone book cover.

INSERT - TELEPHONE

It reads 525-8259.

END FLASHBACK

int.  crAWDAD RANCH TAVERN - DAY

Alex sits at the end of the bar.  He is visibly drunk.  The bartender, ROB, stands behind the bar, near Alex.  There are several empty glasses sitting on the bar in front of Alex.

aLEX

Can you be redeemed by God?

roB

What are you talking about?

aLEX

Have you asked for his forgiveness?

roB

You're losin' it.

aLEX

I'm not sure if I can be forgiven.

I mean, is theft as bad as lying or cheating...and killing?

rob

I don't know.

aLEX

Do you believe in God, Rob?

roB

I guess.  Yeah sure.

aLEX

God!  He'll cure your pain, make all the sins go away.

Rob leans over the bar to get closer to Alex.

roB

Why don't you lay off a bit.

The door to the bar BANGS open.  Walker walks in.  He approaches Alex and stands firm, staring at him. 

Alex matches the direct eye contact.

Walker pulls out the coffee-soiled papers from his pocket.

aLEX

What you got there, chief?

He shoves the paper into Alex's face.  Alex doesn't waver.

Walker, hesitates, then folds the sheet into quarters and tucks it back into his shirt.

Alex nods in understanding.

aLEX

Any new info?

Walker motions for Alex to leave the bar.

roB

You want anything, Walker?

wALKER

Let's go somewhere.

Alex shrugs it off and they both leave.

Rob takes Alex's empty high-ball glasses and begins to clean the bar with a large bar towel.

ext.  forest - day

The sun is just starting to make its descent behind the trees.

Alex and Walker hike their way to the spot where Alex was camped out, earlier.  Walker has his gun out and Alex walks ahead of him, confidently.

Alex speaks without looking back at Walker.

aLEX

So you gonna tell me what's up?

They get to the exact spot where Alex found the body.  Alex kneels down, grabs a handful of dirt, and shakes it in his hand, just playing with it.

walkER

Everyone I talked to said there was someone following Jan.  What if that man, isn't Lionel Langley?

aLEX

So?

wALKER

I think it's time to go big.  I've talked to Murphy and he thinks we go public with everything.  Maybe someone out there can identify our mystery man.

aLEX

We got Langley, Walker.

Walker puts the gun back into his holster.

wALKER

We know where Langley is.  Problem is we think he's got an alibi.

Alex's eyes stare intently out over the lake.

aLEX

You don't say.

wALKER

Yeah, Murphy and I think the stalker is the way to take the investigation.  The guy's gotta be a sitting duck, just waiting to get picked off.

aLEX

What if he doesn't turn up.

wALKER

Phone records.  His number would be all over her phone records.

Walker takes his gun out and raises it towards Alex.

aLEX

I talked to Beth again today.

wALKER

So what did y'all talk about?

aLEX

Redemption.

wALKER

Whose?

aLEX

We all need redemption, big guy.  Anyway, we talked about forgetting the difference between right and wrong.

wALKER

We're all guilty of that.

aLEX

From the smallest details to the most grievous of mistakes.

wALKER

We all make mistakes, Alex.

aLEX

Well, a person can make one mistake that leads to another, and another, and another until we are all defined by our mistakes.

wALKER

It ain't a mistake if you can't correct it.  Then it becomes something else.

aLEX

That's what Beth was saying.

wALKER

What'd you say?

aLEX

I don't remember. 

Walker cocks his gun.

aLEX (cont'd)

I don't know what evidence you think you have, but you got nothing on me.  You go nothing.  You shoot me here and you go down for cold blooded murder. 

Walker's walkie-talkie spits out a high-pitched SQUEAL, then a voice.

aLEX

We don't got Jan's body, Armando.  You got nothing!

wALKER

Shut up.

He puts his gun down and picks up his walkie-talkie.

muRPHY  (o.s.)

Get your butt back home, Walker.  We've got what we need to get the guy.

Alex's eyes widen.

wALKER

What do you got?

muRPHY (O.S.)

It's Lionel.  Lightning all right.  Beth just brought in the topper.  And we got Buck and Mavis here,too.

No response from Walker.

murPHY (O.S.)(cont'd)

You copy?

walker

Yeah, I copy.  Alex and I will be right in.

He replaces the walkie-talkie onto his belt.

Alex gives him a playful shrug.

aLEX

This is getting interesting.

int.  shERIFF'S OFFICE - DAY

Walker and Alex enter to find Beth sitting hunched over in a chair. 

Buck and Mavis sit behind the counter, next to Murphy, who's on the phone.

wALKER

What's going on?

Murphy hangs up.

murPHY

Walker, Alex.  You two were right, Lionel Langley was up to no good.

He grabs an evidence bag off the counter.

muRPHY

Beth brought in an earring and some unmentionables.  She said the stuff wasn't hers.  'Bout that time, Buck calls, says he ain't heard from Jan. 

aLEX

Really.

muRPHY

Yeah.  So I ask about the earring.  Red and yellow, or gold, triangle shaped, about two inches on each side.

He hands Walker the the yearbook with Jan's picture in it.  The same shot as before.

muRPHY

The same damn earrings.

buCK

She wore them all the time.  They were one of a kind, made by them White Cloud Indians.

mAvIS

She said they were for good luck.

Buck turns to Alex.

buCK

I'm sorry about the other day.

Alex shakes his head.

wALKER

So...

muRPHY

We gotta opens this up now.  See if we can get our hands on Lionel.  Walker, give the state police a holler.  Tell them we need an all points bulletin and give the info they need.

Murphy puts his arm around Mavis, who's started to cry softly.

muRPHY

Don't worry.  We'll find this guy.  He'll have Jan.

Alex walks outside.

ext.  shERIFF'S OFFICE - DAY

Alex looks around his clothing for a cigarette.  There are none left.

aLEX

(To himself)

Shit.

Walker walks outside.

wALKER

I'm gonna tell them what I know.

aLEX

What if I didn't even know her.  What if I was just investigating a case?

wALKER

Alex.

aLEX

You go and tell Buck and Mavis it wasn't Lionel Langley who killed her.  Go ahead.

Walker turns to go back inside.

aLEX

You gotta cigarette?

walkER

I don't smoke.

Walker opens the door and heads inside.

ext.  foreST - NIGHT - flashback

Alex stands by Jan's dead body, wrapped in plastic.  The body is naked.

He runs his fingers through her hair.

A SNAP of a twig can be heard.

aLEX

Who's there?

Out of the shadows comes, Beth, draped in a long overcoat.

bETH

Who are you?

aLEX

I'm camping.  Why don't you continue on?

She walks closer to him.

He pulls out his 9mm automatic pistol and points it at her.

bETH

Aahh!  She's dead.  She's dead.

aLEX

Get out of here now.

Beth stands still.

bETH

That's her.  That's her.

aLEX

One more time.  Get out of here now.

Beth scurries away.

Alex keeps the gun pointed at her long after she is gone.

He lowers the gun and pushes the body into the river.

int.  wilEY'S HOUSE - DAY

Buck and Mavis watch their big screen television.  They sit in their personal TV watching chairs.

On the television is a state policeman and Murphy.

state policeman

We're looking for a young woman aged twenty-three.

A picture of Jan appears on the screen.

state policeman

Ginger hair, out-going personality.

murPHY

If anyone has seen this woman or this man.

A picture of Lionel Langley appears on the screen.

muRPHY

Lionel Langley, known as Lightning. Please call the Andrew County Sheriff's Department at 533-0390.  Thanks.

Murphy and the State policeman appear back on the screen.

muRPHY

A reward of thirty thousand dollars will be given to any information leading to the whereabouts of either one of these people.  Thanks.

mAvIS

(To Buck)

Can we afford it?

buCK

We'll manage.

ext.  forest - night - FLASHBACK

Beth drags Jan's body out of the lake.  She puts it up into her wheel barrow and pushes it away.

ext.  nEAR LIONEL'S TRAILER - night - flashback

Beth light a large fire near the trailer.  Jan's body is in middle of the bonfire.  Beth sits on the ground looking on as the fire reflects off the trailer's windows.

int.  aleX'S APARTMENT - NIGHT - flASHBACK

Alex sits on a fold-up chair.  In front of him, on the couch, is Jan.  She is bound and gagged and laying on a plastic mat.

Alex gets up and sits on the couch with her.

He strokes her hair again and again.

He undoes her gag.

Jan

Aaahh!

aLEX

Shut up.  Shut up!

He punches her in the mouth with his fist.

jan

Oww.

She merely whimpers now.

He gets up and walks over to the the corner of the room.  He takes a nine iron out of his golf bag and walks back over to the couch.

He takes the club and pounds it into her mid-section.

Again.

Again.

Again.

Again.

Again.

Again.

Again.

She stops whimpering.  She makes no noise whatsoever.

He throws the golf club across the room.

aLEX

I'm a cop.  I'm a cop.

fade out.

 

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